Monday, October 09, 2017

The Art of Feeling by Elizabeth Jeannel

The Art of Feeling has the potential to be a great book; the text just needs to be reworked. I often got lost and confused by the abrupt shift in point of view. There weren't any additional breaks between the paragraphs to indicate that a shift was happening, which would have allowed the reader to follow along with more clarity and understanding. In general, I think that the writing could have been more developed in terms of details and in drawing the reader into the story. With some editing tweaks, this could be a much stronger book.