Monday, March 05, 2018

Once Broken by DM Hamblin

This was a great story with a well-developed plot. The characters are strong and complex. The beginning of the book started off with good writing and a good flow. My only suggestion is to break the story up into two books and further develop the second half of the book so that it can stand alone on its own. Another suggestion is to do a closer edit to catch some minor typos and grammatical errors. Overall, such a good read!